| 2019-07-20 20:14:45 |
Honeymoon Tragedy
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This is also one of my favorites, great story telling |
| 2019-07-20 20:15:42 |
The Communion
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well, I got lost a bit by the characters. After reading the sentence over a few times I finally get whos is who and whats happening. Needs more work. |
| 2019-07-20 20:16:42 |
Coming of age_(3)
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The ghost angle is always weird for me, so the story implies that she can feel whats happening to her body after she's dead. Which is weird to me. |
| 2019-07-20 20:17:20 |
My Lady DA Joanna
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This one is too similar to The Last Conference, though good, but too similar to stand out. |
| 2019-07-20 20:19:36 |
A Fatal Association
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Another Masterpiece, love the story telling in the 2nd half. First half was a little rushed, Ashley's demise was glanced over and the torture and killing seems really sloppy at times. But a story of this length is very good. |