| 2019-04-16 22:29:04 |
Banging her one agian
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The story is fine. However, it seems that English isn't your first language as there are lots of writing mistakes. I would recommend getting the free version of Grammarly.com to help your writing, but that's just a suggestion |
| 2019-04-16 22:36:12 |
My New Girlfriend_(1)
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The story is OK. I do suggest that you find someone that has English as their first language. That would help your writing a lot. Also, get the free version of Grammarly.com. |
| 2019-04-18 12:25:23 |
The Chauffeur (#38) The Investigation Begins
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@greywolf42 I'm not sure where I called them the Paxton's as it was always supposed to be the Jaxson's, so I'll guess it to be just a typo. Sorry about that. |
| 2019-04-28 06:11:37 |
The Chauffeur (#39) Back to Business
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@Dbuck, where did you go? |
| 2019-05-07 21:04:46 |
The Chauffeur (#41) The Limo Companies
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@Mabear, chapters 42 and 43 have been sitting here waiting for them to be published, They are already up on the other site if you can't wait. I've just started writing chapter 44. |