| 2019-01-24 21:00:44 |
The Chauffeur(#3)...... First Day/ Jill
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Thank you for the kind words. |
| 2019-01-25 09:58:06 |
The Chauffeur (#17) The Fab Five
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@Busga69, Thank you for your kind words. |
| 2019-01-25 18:38:13 |
Nervous Wreck
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I'm not sure what to say. A long lead up to a disappointing ending. One week later? Really? Maybe I'm too stupid to make the connection. Oh well, it is just fiction. Keep writing, you do have a story telling talent. |
| 2019-01-27 14:45:15 |
Carole's Story 07 – The New Boss
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This was nice, however, I didn't think it was as well written as a couple of the others. Oh well, we patiently wait for further stories. |
| 2019-01-27 16:56:14 |
When Coach Walked In
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Really a short story. Nice story though. Hopefully there will be further chapters. I could see several opportunities with a whole new meaning for 'homecoming'.....or would it be home-cumming? |