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Comments from PABLO DIABLO
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-01 21:32:47 | GETTING Into My SISTER | Quite possibly one of the BEST stories that I have read. Well thought out, very erotic, painted delightful pictures in the reader's head. Just utterly AWESOME. Thanks for doing such a great job and crafting such an amazing tale. |
| 2018-09-02 03:53:20 | The New Pills | Just awesome. Did not see the whole Mother and her personal trainer coming (or is it cumming. ha ha) |
| 2018-09-03 23:23:15 | It all started with Shannon | The first story I wrote and had published on her is titled "Amy and Darleen".There is another story that I wrote. It is a part 2 that is waiting to be published by this website. I see you have many many stories published on here. I'm going to work my way through the list and read a bunch of them. Thank you for the kind words. |
| 2018-09-05 00:42:11 | My Neighbor Emily | Story was nice. It had its erotic moments. Keep writing! As to what Assripper916 pointed out about Jameson and Jim Beam its a very small error but easily fixed with googling bourbons such as wlld turkey. Anytime you offer A or B in your stories make sure that they are paired correctly. Overall, keep writing! |
| 2018-09-05 19:29:19 | Amy and Darleen | Hey Countrycadillac and deohyouge I have now published a part of Amy and Darleen if you're interested in reading it. www.sexstories.com/story/88043/ Would like to get some feedback. It's about the same length as the first Amy and Darleen story. |