| 2021-03-02 03:07:42 |
Agatha Allbut & The Bimbo Squad Ch 07 Reunions
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Why haven't you finished this? I know I'm not the only disappointed reader. |
| 2021-03-02 03:44:52 |
The Proposition 3
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This guy is a real asshole. |
| 2021-03-02 05:12:02 |
My continuing journey
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Linda needs serious psychotropics AND lessons on pleasure. |
| 2021-03-24 01:58:27 |
THE SIX FOR SEX CLUB
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40s are OLDER? |
| 2021-03-17 01:40:01 |
ROYAL FLORIDA ACADEMY ! 1
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My main suggestion is that you use punctuation! Proper punctuation makes a story much easier to read. Perhaps finding someone to edit your story before submitting it to be posted? The gist of this story is good but it's hard to read as it is. I definitely appreciate your kind wishes as well. |