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Comments from ExtremelyDisturbed
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-06-25 06:16:38 | terminator the sarah connor chronicles johns adventures | your story sucked. and saying that is even too much credit. |
| 2009-06-26 07:32:50 | The amazing doggy door. | Fantastic. I loved it. Great work. |
| 2012-03-30 16:45:00 | Daughters Girlfriend | Good Story but you need to work on sentence structure and punctuation. Otherwise I enjoyed it. |
| 2012-03-30 16:48:38 | The Party - Part 1 | You need to work on your story a bit more. It is too romantic and soppy. I felt like I wanted to slit my wrists. No Offence. But in future write a sex story for sex. Not a sex story for Romance |