| 2021-03-18 00:33:28 |
Family Strip Poker: The Trilogy
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AWESOME. good grammar & spelling, some paragraphs a little long but good dialogue,action details & good flow & scenario. Glad I found 3rd installment. Looking forward tm the next generation. THANJS |
| 2021-03-13 17:44:03 |
Denny’s Breakfast Treat – 7
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Wonder if the girl in McDonald's window is forgotten? Seems another 'probe' is needed to keep the girls sated! Again, THANKS for posting here! |
| 2021-03-17 18:46:40 |
The Other Couple 1/2
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If this is a good example of your talent & work, I'm going to read more of your stories! THANKS for sharing! |
| 2021-03-28 17:22:19 |
Mutual Attraction - Part 4
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Excellent! Loved the flow of action, buildup of intensity & relationship of Wayne & Lou. Adding Fiona & the opening ofo opportunity for Wayne & Lou to continue loving, was an excellent conclusion (to me). Then the followup/epilogue is (tn me) the best outline/format |
| 2021-03-29 02:42:35 |
Ancient Fossile
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"Sorry, töo much votes for this story today". Loved the mutuak seduction. THANKS |