| 2021-02-27 00:37:17 |
A Son Lusts for His Mother Ch. 4 - 6
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Well written! |
| 2021-02-28 02:28:36 |
Giving Jen The Freedom To Live
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Enjoyed, good scenario, grammar, dialogue, paragraphs, & flow. Surprised Greg hasn't swapped Cody for Jen at least once during all this time. I guess Cody is the only woman Jen has wanted to see you fuck. THANKS sharing yu'll fun for us |
| 2021-02-28 07:53:28 |
BUYING MY STEP-SISTER, PT.4
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Some paragraphs a little long. Improve that by better dialogue. Places Ash & Jon speak in the same paragraph. Great plot, spelling fine, |
| 2021-03-02 21:40:52 |
Texas Freeze - Part 2
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"Sorry, too many votes for this story" (2 votes) Voted Pos on #1 but not allowed to comment. Excellent scenario, grammar, spelling, 2 speaking in one paragraph.good flow. Swapping partner is one of my favorite scenes! Loved " the Breakfast Club" Being 125 miles NE of DFW, we made it thru"Texas Freeze of '21" because of gas heaters. Power off 3 hrs 1st time, 1 hr 2nd time. @ 79 wife & I & her sister didn't have near the exciting time your friend did! Enjoyed all your series I've read. THANKS! |
| 2021-03-03 01:00:29 |
A daughters friends seduce wife
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Looking forward to more of the events to follow. |