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Comments from DudeInATurtleneck
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-02-26 07:43:58 | His women (1) | Sorry, not to my tastes...started off really good, then he became an asshole |
| 2020-03-07 12:53:19 | Coming Home to Visit Pt 1 | DEFINITELY would like a second chapter, at least! |
| 2020-03-09 00:22:39 | One Stone | Liked the story, though I thought her forgiveness of Aaron, whose betrayal was greater, was a little too easy. What does the title of the story mean? |
| 2020-05-06 01:02:12 | Twins, Ch 3 | Overall, a positive review...I understand the negative comments regarding the ending being jarring and not consistent with how Mike was presented, and was wholly unnecessary; Melanie could’ve given in and not be taken forcibly. Granted, the very first line of the story, where he’s a whiner about mommy not making him breakfast, DOES establish him as a bit of a Prat. |
| 2020-05-27 19:41:49 | Stepbrother Sleepwalking Surprise | Really liked it...one thing though: the mother and father aren’t “step” anything, just adoptive parents. You call the boy and girl “stepbrother and stepsister”, which was equally confusing...are they, then, two unrelated kids who were adopted by this couple, or we’re they actual step siblings (mom & dad got married and then both died)? A little fleshing out of the family dynamic would’ve been a bonus to the story. |