| 2018-04-14 07:40:17 |
Marching Band Bus Ride Fun
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The whole point of the marching band is that they perform at halftime. They can’t just sneak out during their one thing that night. |
| 2018-04-17 03:47:18 |
Helping out a buddy and his wife
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Learn to properly write dialogue. |
| 2017-11-18 05:52:13 |
An Interesting Turn of Events
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Loved it. There were a couple of spelling and punctuation errors, but no one's perfect. Write more! |
| 2018-04-26 21:36:16 |
THE STABLE BOY [Edited]
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I feel like they didn't ever say 'ass' but other than that I liked it. |
| 2017-11-29 05:01:28 |
My Neighbor Emily
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I like the story, but you need to learn how to write dialogue. You don't put it in a new line unless someone else starts talking. It was confusing and it took me a few minutes to figure what the hell was going on. Also learn about quotation marks. But other than those two things I thought it was great. |