| 2019-11-14 04:09:44 |
Taking Beth
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Breaking this into smaller paragraphs is helpful, but great story |
| 2019-11-18 01:42:47 |
Vile power of lust
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I wouldn't say this was "poor" I'd say it has a lot of bones and great potential. More details in the feeling, forcing, etc, department and watch some of the grammar and spelling. But other than that I love the idea of it. Hope it continues |
| 2020-03-26 02:30:17 |
Breeder Rape Future - Repopulation Recovery Act
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I like this world very much |
| 2020-03-26 02:30:24 |
Breeder Rape Future - Repopulation Recovery Act
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I like this world very much |
| 2020-03-26 02:30:32 |
Breeder Rape Future - Repopulation Recovery Act
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I like this world very much |