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Comments from dereck353824
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2018-07-28 08:14:16 | it started with my mom 3 | Your stories are short and sweet which I like, a lot of people on here write too much trying to build the story up, all you need to know is who is involved, what they look like and what they do, good work. The only thing I would say is maybe put a gap between paragraphs, my eyes get lost when reading. Otherwise, great stuff!! |