| 2017-07-16 13:19:12 |
Bree 2 - Girlfriend's First Time
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Long-winded, repetitive and having read another of the author's "true story" the scene descriptions were pretty much exactly alike. I don't think I'll read the rest of the series it just feels like I'm going round in circles. |
| 2017-07-12 23:55:35 |
The Julie Journals - When the planets align
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Awesome story! Did you ever get to enjoy Hector again? Did you finally get your own canine lover? Hope to read more of your journal entries. |
| 2017-07-13 03:04:30 |
A Game Of Inches - Conclusion - Epilogue
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Wish you hadn't killed him off, I would have liked the ending to not be so sad. Still great writing though. |
| 2017-07-13 03:12:16 |
I wonder if
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Fun, hope you continue on with this fictional spin-off. |
| 2017-07-13 03:19:07 |
03 - The Chico Tales
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I hope you can write more about Michelle, her dad, and chico. I kinda felt like you rushed through their storyline to get to the one about her mom and Julie. |