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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-01-12 00:10:56 | Shopping with Daddy_(2) | This is pretty wild, but needs a little bit more variety, which you started to have at the end when the dads started one-upping each other. Don’t have them all do the same things one after the other. Definitely want to read a part 2! |
| 2017-06-18 19:04:19 | Nerdy Niece (ch 1?) | I would have liked to have seen the role playing relate more directly to the seduction and sex. Rather than playing a game, then having sex, the narrator should convince her to "get into the spirit" of being a sexy ranger. Maybe have her act out how she would seduce the boss, then ramp up the tension from there. The other players could tease her, which would give her motivation to try harder and do more extreme things to prove them wrong and earn their respect. |
| 2017-08-16 02:02:44 | Dangerouse Night | Wow! I hope you're planning on a follow-up to this one. It's very hot. I had Siri read it to me on a walk and had to cut it short to come home and touch myself. |
| 2017-10-09 06:38:32 | Special Bond-Long Weekend at the Lake Chapt 1-27 (Revised) | Pretty decent, but it gets distracted at times with pointless detail. Especially cleaning the boat. Seems like you just want to prove that you know how a boat works. Just not necessary. That said, there were a lot of great moments, and the overarching plot was fun to follow. Candy is adorable, and the standout scene is when the two couples incestuously hook up in view of each other. I wish there was more of that. |
| 2017-10-15 20:55:33 | The Anonymous & The Curious ch2 | Kristy knew, right? Follow up with her and Lindsay, mask off? And yes, he needs to take Elizabeth, and her sister at the same time, too. |