| 2019-06-20 09:47:31 |
My Story - The High School Years (Chapter 2)
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Not the greatest writing, but certainly not the worst I've read on this site. The best way to learn to write is to read good writing and pay attention. Your problem is NOT how long it takes you to "get somewhere" as tonvrains says. Good writing requires backstory and a build-up. It also requires good spelling, grammar, and syntax. You can get (and you may already have a spelling and grammar checker. I suggest Grammarly. Syntax you learn by reading. Please don't take my suggestions as discouraging. I don't mean them that way. |
| 2019-07-01 08:49:49 |
Pure Strip Poker
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I was bored as can be with all the detail about the game and who had what cards. Not really surprised since I hate poker and find it boring. I had expected it to be a simple draw one game. But none of that is about your writing. |
| 2019-07-01 10:43:46 |
Pure Strip Poker - 5 (Final)
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I find it infuriating when people try to rewrite other people's true stories. And often they do so as Anonymous. I wonder if some of these "rewriters" don't know the difference between truth and fiction. |
| 2019-09-09 06:53:09 |
George's 40th
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Good story. I just can't imagine that it really happened. But I've had things happen in my life that really happened that I'm sure some people wouldn't believe are true. So, maybe it ia true. |
| 2019-11-29 04:09:05 |
Texas Flight Attendant Will Strip Nude From Her Uniform and Masturbate to Orgasm While You Watch
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Too many details that are inconsistent with your character. This is not a true story. |