| 2018-10-24 08:30:57 |
A Cheating Wife's Diary
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If you write any more, please get an editor. The story wasn't bad. The grammar and syntax ruined it for me. Besides, there were several things that told me the story as written wasn't true. I like stories that are true or at least could be true. |
| 2018-10-24 11:00:31 |
A Cheating Wife's Diary
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I decided to read another of your stories. I think you must not be a native English-speaker. My suggestion of an editor still applies. It might help you learn to speak English better, too. |
| 2019-03-17 23:49:19 |
Potential Part 28
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I love this and am glad to read another chapter and beyond eager to read the next. |
| 2019-03-24 07:07:05 |
Jamie's sister
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Are you finished with The Secret Cheerleader Vote? |
| 2019-04-07 22:47:40 |
A New Day, A New Us part 6
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I didn't care for it, but you obviously have a lot of fans, so keep writing for them. I just won't read any more. BTW, I don't believe anything that's from anonymous readers. They could all be one person. |