| 2017-06-25 11:29:15 |
Vampire next door
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A very yummy story, though the there were many details, you seemed to have skimmed over the killing of the vampire with Anita, I think it would have been better had you written that into your story... still very good, you left off some bits, including the ending! Thank you for sharing this with us! |
| 2017-07-02 12:45:49 |
My Life. Ch. 10...
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Another great chapter to this story! Very yummy |
| 2017-09-17 14:22:02 |
My Life. Ch. 13...
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I gave it a positive vote, because of the whole story... but, unlike the story it was very rushed, jumped around to touch on each character and just seemed like you wanted to end it... It's typical of amateur writers to commit harikari with stories after a while. But this one so good... thank you! |
| 2017-09-30 18:00:17 |
Amy, Are you OK_(0)
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A very yummy story, I’m hoping it’s only chapter one |
| 2018-01-12 02:45:56 |
Working out with mom
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A very yummy start to this story! I hope you add more soon! Thank you! |