| 2016-04-14 15:47:07 |
Innocence Enslaved Part 2: Overwhelmed
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Anyone voting it down let me know what you didn't like so I can improve in my next story. |
| 2016-04-15 02:34:41 |
Innocence Enslaved Part 2: Overwhelmed
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Thanks for the suggestion, I'm sure you'll enjoy part 3 and the ending I have planned... |
| 2016-04-26 11:24:05 |
Innocence Enslaved Part 2: Overwhelmed
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Thank you for your honesty. You may not like my plans for part 3 or the finale but I have different stories planned you might enjoy. |
| 2016-12-06 21:07:28 |
Brandy's Nightmare Part One_(0)
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+1 from me. I know all too well how much it sucks being negged on your first story for not realizing online stories are formatted differently to books. Good start, I look forward to seeing more. |
| 2016-05-09 15:48:33 |
House of Ordeals
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Extreme even for my tastes, but I hate people who neg because they don't like the themes. I liked the writing style and attention to detail. |