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Comments from doz
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-07-01 01:33:57 | My interesting summer | Why do you switch between 1st person and 3rd person? I can't be bothered reading something so badly written. -ve vote |
| 2015-01-06 04:52:41 | My Sister In Law Beth. Chapter 14 - 15 | A good story, marred a little by some editorial errors. For example:"Jeff, you were the most doting, caring, loving, thoughtful and considerable husband" I assume that you mean "considerate". Also you write "breathe" when you mean "breath" and you misspell "masturbate". There are many other such errors. |
| 2015-08-23 00:32:28 | Holy Shit!!!! | next=/=neck |
| 2016-10-17 06:55:46 | After Ellie's end of school party (1) | And only 168 votes for 31722 reads! |
| 2017-03-07 05:30:42 | My Beautiful Wife, The Shameless Slut - 2 | A good story, spoilt by a few grammatical errors: You write "and I" when sometimes it should be "and me". e.g. "Claudia looked at Tammy and I and ..." "Claudia had more intense plans for Carey and I later. " |